Writer Consulting Services

Carol Hovsepian’s Consulting Services focuses on screenplays and novels (make sure you read her reviews at the bottom!)

Reviews for Consulting

I had the sincere pleasure of working with Carol Hovsepian on a myriad of scripts I penned for the entertainment industry. Within 48 hours of sending her my scripts, she responded with detailed analyses, guidance on structure, character development and detailed grammatical usage. The services I received were by far superior to any expectations I had.
RJ Smith, Storyteller Entertainment, Author and Screenwriter

Carol’s services involve extensive notes in:

Character Development (full arc, consistent use of character traits/motivations and how to use the traits/motivations of other characters to help move the protagonist forward and complete his/her arc, unique dialogue matching traits, making characters unique: relatable, memorable and believable).

Story development (structure, natural flow, sensibility, execution of theme) and will help develop a higher Concept if necessary.

Visual writing (enhance the use of visuals since we watch the movie more than hear it, appropriate action that moves story forward, short, descriptive visual action, smooth scene transitions, catchy intros and memorable endings, visual use of words).

In addition, she makes sure that dialogue and action matches your characters’ traits that keep your story moving forward and the reader/moviegoer engaged.

And, she’ll clean up the spelling and grammar if you want.

Please note: Carol does not offer to write loglines or synopses.

Remember: There is no guarantee of a sale or option ever. It’s a crapshoot so don’t blame Carol, yourself, or anyone else. Just keep improving and submitting and your work WILL eventually find its home.

All ScreenwritingU Pro Series Alumni ALWAYS get 10% off.

To make it simple, there are three choices:

1. Basic Service: $250 PayPal

  • Detailed overview of Character and Story Development (the two essentials before the nitty gritty details)
  • General comments on execution of Concept
  • Unlimited # of Carol’s page notes.
  • One follow-up email to Carol with questions
  • Quick turnaround (Usually within a day or shortly thereafter if Carol’s not bombarded)
  • Your Screenplay must be sent in Final Draft PDF (no more than 120 pages)
  • Novels must be sent in MS Word PDF up to 300 pages (email
    carol@lamoogproductions.com if page numbers exceed 300)

Pick a payment option:

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2. Detailed Service: $450 PayPal

  • Detailed Notes on Character Development up to 4 characters
  • Detailed Notes on Story Development/Structure
  • Detailed Notes on Visual Writing
  • General comment on concept and theme
  • Detailed identification of Grammar/Spelling/ Word Choice problems
  • Detailed suggestions/ideas to improve or fix problems
  • Unlimited # of Carol’s Page Notes
  • Quick Turnaround (usually 2-3 days)
  • Your Screenplay must be sent in Final Draft PDF (no more than 120 pages)
  • Novels must be sent in MS Word PDF up to 300 pages (email
    carol@lamoogproductions.com if page numbers exceed 300)
  • One phone call to answer questions
  • Carol’s 1-2 page overview of your rewrite

Pick a payment option:

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(Required for PSA Discount Only)

3. Rewrites

This is for screenplays only. Studios, production companies and individuals may contact Carol at carol@lamoogproductions.com for quote.